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[Cyberfire]

Ever heard of Anamanaguchi?

Criticisms; The guitar needs to be quieter and the drums louder, at the moment the guitar drowns most other sounds out so when it's playing the only C64 sounds you can hear are the higher frequencies because the guitar's dominating the lower and mid ranges.
If you EQ the drums, increase the kick 's volume at roughly 100hz and the same to the snare at 200hz to give it a really punhy sound to suit the rest of the song. You also might want to add a filter low pss filter on the guitar, but keep the knob/dial/slider; whatever controls the cut-off freq, near the top/end.
Aside from that, the melodies, harmonies and synths are all really good, keep it up!

Not sure if what i typed makes any sense, but I'm lazy and i can't be arsedto check.

MashedByMachines responds:

Thanks a lot for your reviewe, im not really good at mastering, so advice are always welcome :)

[[v150r - lifeform VIP]]

Real nice stuff but...

...could you please submit a higher quality version if you can?
I like the simple melody that carries on throught; very catchy, reminded me of Break and Klute until the reese came in. Percussion could be punchier, especialy the bass drum but i love the little chicka-chicka from the hihat and the thnic drums in the background.
Thanks for uploading this man.

v150r responds:

of course, as soon as i finishing it, there will be a better version. i have many ideas, things to do with the music. as soon as i feel i reached the best possible sound, and im satisfied with it, there will be a "new" submission.
thanks for the long answer, i try to listen to it.
have a good day! ;)

[dead in minutes]

Make this into a song!

i woud give this a 10, but it's too short.
when the electro/guitar/synth comes in after 24 seconds, have the first note fade in maybe with some delay.
please make this into a 3 - 5 minute song, i would pay for it =]

sonicxtreme responds:

heh...thanks man..ill see wut i can do...got more in the makin...peace